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Autor: | Ari [ 2008-05-28, 21:27 ] |
Tytuł: | bardzo proszę o poprawienie błędów |
Jestem samoukiem, więc wszystkie podpowiedzi i informacje będą mile widziane ![]() "1600 km in 14h. (in view of stopovers and our polish roads) it's really good result ![]() Yeah, I am alive. What is more, I enjoyed rollercoasters as much, that I tryied it many times (spodobały mi sie tak bardzo, że jeździłam na nich wiele razy), I had even the courage to go on the first places ![]() Oh God, that was amazing. Admittedly my elbows are beaten-up, I have many scratchs and bruises, but what to do ![]() We advanced the theory (wysunęlismy teorię), that I am just very small, and I had too many free place in a cabin. That's true, I just flew in cabins... Well, there is no doubt with one thing. I had great fun there and felt again like a child ![]() ![]() I broken down all sorts of fears and have tried all. Blue tornado rocks, and was the greatest attraction there. I was in aquapark as well, and there I have made the most dangerous thing in my all life. I am afraid of water in water basin. Ofc if it has not more than 120 cm, everything is alright, but when it is higher, or when there are waves... I went down from slide which had more less 6 floors high (czy height?)... to swimming-pool. First 3-4 floors was almost plumb... I realised what I have done few seconds after I was in basin ![]() ![]() Anyway, that was really great experiance, and if you have ever possibility to use something like that, don't wonder (nie zastanawiaj się), just do it ![]() dziękuję z góry i pozdrawiam. |
Autor: | Adam S [ 2008-06-06, 19:59 ] |
Tytuł: | Re: bardzo proszę o poprawienie błędów |
Nie poprawię całości - niektórych fragmentów nie rozumiem. jak zwykle poprawki przesunięte słowa uwagi alternatywy Ari napisał(a): Jestem samoukiem, więc wszystkie podpowiedzi i informacje będą mile widziane
![]() "1600 km in 14h. (in view of stopovers and our Polish roads) it's a really good result ![]() Yeah, I am alive. What is more, I enjoyed rollercoasters so much, that I tryied it (this - tego lub them - ich) many times (spodobały mi sie tak bardzo, że jeździłam na nich wiele razy), I had even the courage to go on the first places ?:) A brave girl! Oh God, that was amazing. Admittedly, my elbows are beaten-up, I have many scratches and bruises, but what to do (lub: who cares, lub: that's even not worth mentioning, itp):) We developed a theory (wysunęlismy teorię), that I am just very small, and I had too much (niepoliczalny) free space in a (raczej the) cabin. That's true, I just flew in cabins... Well, there is no doubt with one thing. I had great fun there and felt again like a child ![]() ![]() I've broken down all sorts of fears and have tried all (everything?). Blue tornado rocks, and was the greatest attraction there (???). I was in an aquapark as well, and there I have made the most dangerous thing in all my life. I am afraid of water in water basin. Ofc if it has no more than 120 cm, everything is alright, but when it is deeper, or when there are waves... I went down a slide more or less 6 floors high into the swimming-pool. First 3-4 floors was almost plumb... I realised what I have done a few seconds after I was in the basin ![]() ![]() Anyway, that was a really great experience, and if you have ever possibility to use something like that, don't think twice (nie zastanawiaj się), just do it ![]() dziękuję z góry i pozdrawiam. Ogólna uwaga: nie przejmuj się poprawkami typu "a/the" - ja wpisuję to "na czuja" (po przeczytaniu paru książek po angielsku). W sumie większość to drobiazgi. POzdrawiam Adams |
Autor: | Ari [ 2008-06-15, 20:39 ] |
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many thanks ![]() |
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