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Autor:  Asiurqa [ 2008-08-10, 23:42 ]
Tytuł:  Proszę o sprawdzenie czy dobrze.

Dear Alex, 8.08.08, Krakow
I’m writing this letter during my best holiday in my life. In my first day of holiday I flew to Kenia. I visited National East Tsavo Park. I have seen for the first time wild animals. For example , rhino chased me when I was driving a jeep. It was really exciting. On the other hand insects drives me crazy. Have you ever been in Africa? In the last day In Africa I tasted a traditional food – especially good was a strange fish. Next, I was going to Paris. Really love that city. Whole day I went to exhibitions, but crowd in Luwr really gets on my nerves. At Saturday I Visited relatives (grandmother and grandfather). They live in a small town. They had me round for dinner- it was brilliant. In this way my week was ended. I can’t normally bear Monday, but in holiday everything was different. I had lie-in. After I went to my close friends in Katowice. I don’t like Katowice because it is dirty city. Moreover traffics are really annoying. At Saturday I went back to home by bus.
It was fantastic time for me. At the moment I’m feeling very relaxed. I hope that you will have the same wonderful holiday as me.

Love,
Asia

Autor:  digilante [ 2008-08-11, 01:52 ]
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Piszesz ze piszesz list z wakacji, a piszesz "8.08.08 Krakow"? Tez uwaga - w listach nie uzywa sie skrotow, czyli nie pisze sie "don't" ale "do not", nie "can't" ale "cannot".

...............................................Cracow, 08 August 2008

Dear Alex,

I am writing this letter while on the best holiday of my life. On the first day of my holiday I flew to Kenya. I visited the National East Tsavo Park. I saw wild animals for the first time. For example, a rhino chased me when I was driving a jeep. It was really exciting. On the other hand insects drive me crazy. Have you ever been to Africa? On the last day in Africa I tasted traditional food – a strange fish was especially good. Next, I went to Paris. I really love that city. The whole day I spent visiting museums, but the crowd at the Louvre really got on my nerves. On Saturday I visited my gransparents. They live in a small town. They had me round for dinner - it was brilliant. In this way my week ended. I cannot normally bear Monday, but during holidays everything is different. I had a lie-in. After that I went to my close friends in Katowice. I do not like Katowice because it is a dirty city. Moreover, traffic is really annoying. On Saturday I went back home by bus.
It was a fantastic time for me. At this moment I am feeling very relaxed. I hope that you will have the same wonderful holiday as I did.

Love,
Asia

Autor:  Asiurqa [ 2008-08-11, 10:33 ]
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Dziękuje bardzo za sprawdzenie.

W przykładowym liście w podręczniku Face2face intermediate były użyte don't i tym podobne - to tak na moje usprawiedliwienie. :)

Jestem bardzo wdzięczna, za czytanie moich wypocin i poprawę ich.

Autor:  digilante [ 2008-08-11, 15:03 ]
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Wiesz, jak chodzi o pismo to jestem troche za konserwatywny, staromodny :wink:

Jezeli piszesz do kochanka, to w sumie nie ma znaczenia, ale jezeli cos nawet troche formalnego (list o prace, lub email do szefa, itd), to naprawde pokazujesz lepsza klase pisma jezeli nie bedziesz uzywala skrotow.

Zycze powodzienia z dalsza nauka angielskiego :D

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