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mam napisać opowiadanie w Czasie past simple, past continous i perfect.
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The strangest thing happened at school today because of students from 1G classes. In that happening participed Maths teacher. It was school pause. All the people from the class sit near the classroom, one person had suggested crazy idea. Class agreed witch him, and putlittle piece of peper in keyhale . Them Mr Pamuła came, and he couldn`t open the door. When the teacher caure, nobody wanted to admited that case. Mr Pamuła went for the headmaster and the jonitor, then the headmaster punished all class.

The result of this incident were that the class had been recorgnized by the Mr Pamuła, headmaster and the jonitor, found and given a punischment on from of cleaning all the corridors in school. Schoolchildren.


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The strangest thing happened at school today because of the students from the 1G classes. The Math teacher participated in that. It was the school break. All the people from the class were sitting near the classroom, and one person suggested a crazy idea. The class agreed with him, and he put a little piece of pepper in the keyhole. Then Mr. Pamu³a came, and he couldn`t open the door. When the teacher asked who did it, nobody wanted to admit it/to doing it. Mr Pamu³a went for the headmaster and the janitor, and then the headmaster punished all the class/the whole class/everybody in the class.

The result of this incident was that the class was reorganized by Mr. Pamu³a, the headmaster and the janitor, and the schoolchild who did it was found and given a punishment of cleaning all the corridors in the school.


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Dziękuje bardzo za kolejne udzielenie pomocy :)
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you sure ken that malynka meant "reorganized" not "recognized" in the last line?


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chigga, yes, you could be right that malynka meant "recognized" but I thought she meant "reorganized" because that concept fit better with the sentence and the rest of the story. At this point in the story I do not know why the teacher, headmaster and janitor need to recognize a class they already know.


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