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Witam, jestem uczniem 3 klasy gimnazjum i zlecono mi napisanie artykułu na temat kurczących się zasobów naturalnych, tu akurat napisać miałem o wodzie. :)

Mam nadzieję, że bardzo wielu błęów nie będzie. Z góry dziękuję. :wink:

Did you know that water covers 70% of earth’s surface? Anyone can live without water, that is our paramount resource. Plants are feeding with the water, in adding, water is important element of blood. What can we do to deal with the water shortage problem?
Firstly, we must less water using in our houses. A usefule suggestion would be not to let the water run while shaving or washing. In this way, less water would be wasted in the house. As a resault, we would have got smaller bills for water and we raddem some water.
Secondly, if we water lawn early in the morning, we would reduce water loss through evaporation. If the weather is hot, water ranges to steam and we loss some of it. However, people should plant native trees, that don’t need as much water as imported kinds.
Finally, some of the people save bathwater and dishwater. They should use water both for washing and watering.
On the whole, there are many ways in wich we can reduce water loss. Isn’t it time we all started doing something to reduce water loss.



Załączam pozdrowienia,
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Też się dopiero uczę angielskiego;) To moja propozycja poprawki. Czerowny-błędy, niebieski-nie skumałem, zielony-alternatywa. Pozdr

Did you know that water covers 70% of Earth’s surface? No one can live without water, that is our paramount resource. Plants are feeding with water, in addition, water is important element of blood. What can we do to deal with the water shortage problem?
Firstly, we must use less water in our houses. A useful suggestion would be to not let the water run while shaving or washing. In this way, less water would be wasted in the house. As a result, we would have got lower bills for water and we raddem? some.
Secondly, if we water lawn?early in the morning, we would reduce water loss by evaporation. If the weather is hot, water ranges/changes to steam and we loss some of it. However, people should plant native trees, that don’t need as much water as imported kinds.
Finally, some of the people save bathwater and dishwater. They should use water both for washing and watering.
On the whole, there are many ways in wich we can reduce water loss. Isn’t it time we all started doing something to reduce water loss. //o co chodzi w tym zdaniu?:)


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Ja mieszkam w anglii od 3 lat i znalazlam troche bledow w twoim tekscie. przepisalam go prawidlowo:) :D

Did you know that water covers 70% of earth’s surface? No one can live without water, it is our main resource. Plants need water as food, and also, water is an important element of blood. What can we do to deal with the water shortage problem?
Firstly, we must decrease the water use in our houses. A useful suggestion would be not to let the water run while shaving or washing. This way, less water would be wasted at home. As a result, we would get smaller bills for water and we would save a quite big amount of it.
Secondly, if we water lawn early in the morning, in the summer, we would reduce water loss through evaporation. If its warm or hot outside, water turns to steam and we lose some of it. However, people should plant local trees, that don’t need as much water as imported kinds.
Finally, some people should save bathwater and dishwater. They could use water both for washing and watering.
There are many ways in wich we can reduce water loss. Isn’t it time we all started doing something to reduce water loss?


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Bardzo dziękuję za pomoc. Cóż, nie jest aż tak źle, jak się obawiałem, niemniej dziękuję za wszystkie porady i poprawki.

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Isn’t it time we all started doing something to reduce water loss. //o co chodzi w tym zdaniu?


Czy nie czas zrobić coś, by zredukować utratę wody? :)

Pozdrawiam serdecznie.


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Czy to nie najwyzszy czas zebysmy zaczeli robic cos by zredukowac kurczenie sie zasobow wody ?


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Witam ponownie,
bardzo dziękuję za poprzednio sprawdzony artykuł, dostałem ocenę bardzo dobrą. :)

Proszę więc o sprawdzenie listu, w którym narzekam na otrzymany komputer - również jest to moje zadanie na ocenę, tak więc zależy mi, by była to ocena bardzo dobra. :wink:

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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about a computer which I recently purchased from your company. The computer is your Crysis 2008 with a graphic card nVidia 9900 GTX and processor AMD Frusciante 8,7 Ghz.
To begin with, when I order the computer, I was told it would be delivered in two weeks. However, it took over five weeks for the computer to arrive. What is more, when it finally did arrive, the lead was missing and I was obliged to buy one.
Secondly, I didn’t order preinstallation operating system Microsoft Vista, because I’m using many of Linux editon like the Ubuntu. To make matters worse, I had got terrible issue with graphic card, and I couldn’t find drivers for my graphic card. From time to time I see only bluescreen with raport about error and next computer resets.
I would appreciate it if the graphic card and operating system or computer could be replaced as soon as possible. I also expect a full refund of the money I paid for the missing lead. I hope thet this matter will be resolved as quickly as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Imię i nazwisko


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załóż to jako nowy wątek, a nie odgrzebuj staroci :lol: (większa szansa, że ktoś odpisze)


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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about the computer which I recently purchased from your company. The computer is your Crysis 2008 with a graphic card nVidia 9900 GTX and processor AMD Frusciante 8,7 Ghz.
To begin with, when I ordered the computer, I was told it would be delivered in two weeks. However, it took over five weeks for the computer to arrive. What is more, when it did finally arrive, the lead was missing and I had to to buy a new one.
Secondly, I didn’t order the preinstallation operating system Microsoft Vista, because I’m using many of Linux editon like the Ubuntu. To make matters worse, I had a terrible problem with graphic card, and I couldn’t find drivers for my graphic card. From time to time the screen goes blue and an error comes up. Then the computer goes off.
I would appreciate if the graphic card and operating system or computer could be (was) replaced as soon as possible. I also expect a full refund of the money I have paid for the missing lead. I hope this will be resolved as quickly as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Imię i nazwisko[/quote]


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dalsze poprawki:
(w pierwszym zdaniu "which" jest opcjonalne - to nie jest błąd)
wszędzie graphics card
czy lead = power cord?
Secondly, I didn't order the preinstallation of the Microsoft Vista (optional: operating system), because I’m using many of Linux editons like the Ubuntu.
...I had a terrible problem with the graphics card as I wasn't able to find appropriate drivers for the card.

Uwaga formalna: możesz żądać wymiany systemu opreracyjnego (a w zasadzie zwrotu pieniędzy), jeśli komputery BEZ Visty są tańsze (bo Ubuntu i tak instalujesz sam, preinstalacja niewiele tu zmienia :wink: )

Acha. pozmieniałbym kolejność:
nVidia 9900 GTX graphics card
AMD Frusciante 8,7 Ghz processor


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