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wiekszosc do sprawdzenia, troszke do przetlumaczenie
Telewizja sta³a sie rzecza odgrywajaca znaczaca role w naszym zyciu.
Jest pomocna i s³u¿y rozrywce. There are many advantages and disadvantage of watching TV. Oto kilka z nich.
Young people can watch television programmes (UK spelling, US is programs) like National Geographic and learn about nature, and animals in the world. They can see many places, which they never have the opportunity to see in real world.
Television is an information tool allowing us to quickly get information from around the world, but/and also local news. It's very improtant to know what what is going on around us. (dzieje siê wokó³ nas)
But television doesn't have only advantages. It has disadvantages too.
Television can be dangerous/harmful. When people watch films about a madman/madperson who kills people, because this is his or her hobby, stupid ideas come into one's head.
Television is a 'thief' our time/Television steals/wastes our time. People complain about a lack of/about not having enough time and say that the day should be longer. But time for switching on the TV and seeing/watching/viewing films or programs they usually have. People watch tv at night and they must wake up early, so they are sleepy and they do not work efficiently. (jest ma³o wydajna)
I think we can live wihtout the television, but it is useful in man's life/in our lives, and unfortunetly it has many disadvantages. We must wisely choose the programs and films we watch and sensibly use this invention. My musimy umiejetnie wybierac programy i filmy, które ogladamy oraz rozsadnie korzystac z tego wynalazku.
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